🔳Would you tell me if the following sentences are correct?
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It is often said that fizzy drinks with sugar or sweetener have a detrimental effect on your body.
However, even sparkling water without sugar or sweetener can adversely affect your teeth.
If teeth are bathed in acid from carbonated drinks frequently, more minerals can be dissolved out than get put back in, and there is more risk of tooth wear or erosion.

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🚨 Would you just write down the parts that need to be corrected? If you write down every single sentence in my post from the first sentence till the last one, it is not clear where the target parts are. Thank you for understanding.