- japoński
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niemiecki
Czy to brzmi naturalnie? I believe that people should get their first mobile phones at the age of 16 for the following reasons. First, mobile phones make them have poor sights if they start to use them at too early age. Second, young children are likely to be too absorbed in playing games in applications, so they may not be able to concentrate on studying. However, they will have good self-control by the time they become a high school student.
- angielski (amerykański)
Trochę nienaturalnie
I believe that people should get their first mobile phones at the age of 16 for the following reasons.
First, mobile phones makecan themcause have poor sightseye sight if they start tousing use them at too early of an age.
First, mobile phones makecan themcause have poor sightseye sight if they start tousing use them at too early of an age.
Second, young children are likely to be too absorbed in playing games in applications, so they may not be able to concentrate on studying.
Second, young children are likely to be too absorbed in playing games in applications, so they may not be able to concentrate on studying.
However, they will have good self-control by the time they become a high school studentstudents.
However, they will have good self-control by the time they become a high school studentstudents.
Czy ta odpowiedź była pomocna?
Odpowiedź jest ewidentnie błędna
Wyjaśnienie jest niedostateczne
Odpowiedzi udzielono w nieznanym mi języku
Odpowiedź nie jest związana z pytaniem
Inny powód
Naturalnie
i can understand it well，maybe a native also think it natural. and i disagree with your point due to i watched junk novels all the day when i got a smart phone at 16s but now i can self-control very well so i think young men shoud had been using older-phone when they still studied.
Czy ta odpowiedź była pomocna?
- angielski (amerykański)
Trochę nienaturalnie
I believe that people should get their first mobile phones at the age of 16 for the following reasons.
First, mobile phones makecan themcause have poor sightseye sight if they start tousing use them at too early of an age.
First, mobile phones makecan themcause have poor sightseye sight if they start tousing use them at too early of an age.
Second, young children are likely to be too absorbed in playing games in applications, so they may not be able to concentrate on studying.
Second, young children are likely to be too absorbed in playing games in applications, so they may not be able to concentrate on studying.
However, they will have good self-control by the time they become a high school studentstudents.
However, they will have good self-control by the time they become a high school studentstudents.
"...too absorbed in mobile apps and playing games, so they may not..."
also works as well if you want to be more specific
Czy ta odpowiedź była pomocna?
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"...too absorbed in mobile apps and playing games, so they may not..."
also works as well if you want to be more specific