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flowow

2 cze 2017

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angielski (amerykański)
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Czy to brzmi naturalnie? I tried getting daily moments together in 1 min short clip
Nothing good ever I could imagine without y'all

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nasrimuhammad

2 cze 2017

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angielski (amerykański)
malezyjski Niemal biegły

Trochę nienaturalnie

ahh ok. let me help you re-structure that.

"I tried to capture daily moments of the people around me in this short video as i realize how precious everyday is with them.

is that better?

Czy ta odpowiedź była pomocna?

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nasrimuhammad

2 cze 2017

angielski (amerykański)
malezyjski Niemal biegły

Trochę nienaturalnie

hmm let me rephrase from what you have written. " i tried to capture daily moments of us together in a short video. i always enjoy the good times we have whenever we are together"

was that what you were trying to say?

Czy ta odpowiedź była pomocna?

flowow

2 cze 2017

koreański

@nasrimuhammad thank you so much!! Can I just say "I tried to capture daily moments in a short video since I happened to realize everyday is so precious few days ago Sincerly Love Y'all!"

nasrimuhammad

2 cze 2017

angielski (amerykański)
malezyjski Niemal biegły

Trochę nienaturalnie

ok let me re phrase for you " i tried to capture daily moments in this short video because i realized how precious everyday is, with you".

is this the message you were trying to get through?

Czy ta odpowiedź była pomocna?

flowow

2 cze 2017

koreański

@nasrimuhammad almost :) I wanted to express my message more like "after I realized"

flowow

2 cze 2017

koreański

and does it sound weird when I use "y'all" I'm wondering 😁

nasrimuhammad

2 cze 2017

angielski (amerykański)
malezyjski Niemal biegły

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ahh lets see, so after you realized that "everyday is precious and that is why you want to capture the daily moments in this short video?"

not weird to use ya'll. it gives more of a "texas/country" vibe if you use it. haha

Czy ta odpowiedź była pomocna?

flowow

2 cze 2017

koreański

@nasrimuhammad yes that's it ☺️☺️☺️
ah really? 😂 how about 'uguys' compared to yall?

nasrimuhammad

2 cze 2017

angielski (amerykański)
malezyjski Niemal biegły

Trochę nienaturalnie

"you guys" so from what you're saying lets give this a go.

"i realized that everyday with you guys is precious and that is why i want to capture the daily moments we have together in this short video"

or you can use "ya'll" to replace "you guys". that works too haha

Czy ta odpowiedź była pomocna?

flowow

2 cze 2017

koreański

@nasrimuhammad that's what I wanted to mean Thank you sooo much but I wanna add cool simple sentence below the video 😁 so can I just say "I tried to capture daily moments in this shoooort video realizing how precious everyday is, with people around me" I feel like I've been so obsessed with this video since I started to make it 😂

nasrimuhammad

2 cze 2017

angielski (amerykański)
malezyjski Niemal biegły

Trochę nienaturalnie

ahh ok. let me help you re-structure that.

"I tried to capture daily moments of the people around me in this short video as i realize how precious everyday is with them.

is that better?

Czy ta odpowiedź była pomocna?

flowow

3 cze 2017

koreański

@nasrimuhammad yes It was really really helpful! thank you so much

nasrimuhammad

3 cze 2017

angielski (amerykański)
malezyjski Niemal biegły

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Czy ta odpowiedź była pomocna?

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Czy to brzmi naturalnie? I tried getting daily moments together in 1 min short clipNothing good ever I could imagine without y'all

ahh ok. let me help you re-structure that."I tried to capture daily moments of the people around me in this short video as i realize how precious everyday is with them.is that better?

hmm let me rephrase from what you have written. " i tried to capture daily moments of us together in a short video. i always enjoy the good times we have whenever we are together" was that what you were trying to say?

ok let me re phrase for you " i tried to capture daily moments in this short video because i realized how precious everyday is, with you". is this the message you were trying to get through?

ahh lets see, so after you realized that "everyday is precious and that is why you want to capture the daily moments in this short video?"not weird to use ya'll. it gives more of a "texas/country" vibe if you use it. haha

"you guys" so from what you're saying lets give this a go."i realized that everyday with you guys is precious and that is why i want to capture the daily moments we have together in this short video" or you can use "ya'll" to replace "you guys". that works too haha

ahh ok. let me help you re-structure that."I tried to capture daily moments of the people around me in this short video as i realize how precious everyday is with them.is that better?

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Czy to brzmi naturalnie? I tried getting daily moments together in 1 min short clip
Nothing good ever I could imagine without y'all

ahh ok. let me help you re-structure that.

"I tried to capture daily moments of the people around me in this short video as i realize how precious everyday is with them.

is that better?

hmm let me rephrase from what you have written. " i tried to capture daily moments of us together in a short video. i always enjoy the good times we have whenever we are together"

was that what you were trying to say?

ok let me re phrase for you " i tried to capture daily moments in this short video because i realized how precious everyday is, with you".

is this the message you were trying to get through?

ahh lets see, so after you realized that "everyday is precious and that is why you want to capture the daily moments in this short video?"

not weird to use ya'll. it gives more of a "texas/country" vibe if you use it. haha

"you guys" so from what you're saying lets give this a go.

"i realized that everyday with you guys is precious and that is why i want to capture the daily moments we have together in this short video"

or you can use "ya'll" to replace "you guys". that works too haha

ahh ok. let me help you re-structure that.

"I tried to capture daily moments of the people around me in this short video as i realize how precious everyday is with them.

is that better?